a crowd of umbrellas opening one by one as the rain starts

Revise: the same moody street scene of opened umbrellas swaying in the rain, and this time the puddles on the ground reflect the colored domes of the umbrellas. gemma4 · generation 1

Prompt by profcarroll. Planned by gemma4:e4b, written by qwen3-coder:30b-a3b-q4_K_M.

seed 1 · entry 1628 · published

four frames from a crowd of umbrellas opening one by one as the rain starts under a synthetic pointer — with the ghost pointer

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Brief

The scene depicts a moody, wet city street dominated by numerous opened umbrellas. These umbrellas, which display varied, saturated colors, are seen swaying gently in the steady rain. The wet asphalt below is littered with puddles that act as mirrors, dramatically reflecting the curved, colored domes of the umbrellas. The overall atmosphere is one of constant, rhythmic movement, created by the rain dripping and the umbrellas swaying, emphasizing the contrast between the deep, dark ground and the scattered flashes of color in the reflections.

Artist's statement · qwen3-coder:30b-a3b-q4_K_M, unedited

This sketch captures the atmospheric essence of a rainy city street through dynamic visual elements that respond to simulated wind and rain. The scene features a collection of colorful umbrellas that gradually open and sway gently in the wind, their curved canopies casting soft shadows on the wet pavement. Raindrops fall rhythmically across the screen, interacting with puddles that act as mirrors, reflecting the umbrellas' vibrant colors in rippling patterns. The overall mood is one of quiet movement and contrast between the dark, wet ground and the scattered flashes of saturated color in the reflections, creating a contemplative urban scene where constant, gentle motion emphasizes the interplay of light, shadow, and weather.

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Judgment

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3.46 over 19 pairs

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Source

Repository	https://github.com/profcarroll/sketchgen-gallery/tree/main/e/1628
Raw sketch	sketch/sketch.js
Raw page	sketch/index.html
Attempts	1
Licence	CC BY 4.0
Attribution	“a crowd of umbrellas opening one by one as the rain starts Revise: th…” — sketchgen entry 1628, prompted by profcarroll, written by qwen3-coder:30b-a3b-q4_K_M under the treatment rules file. https://profcarroll.github.io/sketchgen-gallery/e/1628/ Licensed CC BY 4.0.

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Lineage · generation 1 of 2 in the line from entry 1497

a crowd of umbrellas opening one by one as the rain starts
entry 1497 · root · profcarroll
Revise: the same moody street scene of opened umbrellas swaying in the rain, and this time the puddles on the ground reflect the colored domes of the umbrellas.
entry 1628 · generation 1 · gemma4

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Provenance

Entry	1628
Job	1639
State	published
Prompt	a crowd of umbrellas opening one by one as the rain starts Revise: the same moody street scene of opened umbrellas swaying in the rain, and this time the puddles on the ground reflect the colored domes of the umbrellas.
Brief	The scene depicts a moody, wet city street dominated by numerous opened umbrellas. These umbrellas, which display varied, saturated colors, are seen swaying gently in the steady rain. The wet asphalt below is littered with puddles that act as mirrors, dramatically reflecting the curved, colored domes of the umbrellas. The overall atmosphere is one of constant, rhythmic movement, created by the rain dripping and the umbrellas swaying, emphasizing the contrast between the deep, dark ground and the scattered flashes of color in the reflections.
Statement	This sketch captures the atmospheric essence of a rainy city street through dynamic visual elements that respond to simulated wind and rain. The scene features a collection of colorful umbrellas that gradually open and sway gently in the wind, their curved canopies casting soft shadows on the wet pavement. Raindrops fall rhythmically across the screen, interacting with puddles that act as mirrors, reflecting the umbrellas' vibrant colors in rippling patterns. The overall mood is one of quiet movement and contrast between the dark, wet ground and the scattered flashes of saturated color in the reflections, creating a contemplative urban scene where constant, gentle motion emphasizes the interplay of light, shadow, and weather.
Submitted by	profcarroll
Planner	gemma4:e4b · prompt planner-v2
Executor	qwen3-coder:30b-a3b-q4_K_M · prompt executor-v3
Rules file	treatment
Assertions	motion(idle)
Gate	attempt 1: gate exit 0 — motion(idle) pass
Attempts	1
Prompt tokens	3126
Completion tokens	1253
Wall seconds	97.003
Node shape	VM.Standard.A1.Flex 16/96
Seed	1
Lineage	parent 1497 · children none · generation 1 · critique by gemma4:e4b
Revised from	entry 1497's sketch, 89 lines
Source	repository · sketch.js · index.html · attempts attempt-1
Created (UTC)	2026-09-24T13:34:34Z
Published (UTC)	2026-09-26T04:15:00Z
Publish commit	de8414e9a7c9bfb156a018fec5af2d1b6179b436
Licence	CC BY 4.0
Attribution	“a crowd of umbrellas opening one by one as the rain starts Revise: th…” — sketchgen entry 1628, prompted by profcarroll, written by qwen3-coder:30b-a3b-q4_K_M under the treatment rules file. https://profcarroll.github.io/sketchgen-gallery/e/1628/ Licensed CC BY 4.0.

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