rain on a window where each drop holds a tiny upside-down city
Revise: the same view through the rain-streaked windowpane of tiny, upside-down cityscapes, and this time the raindrops collect into larger, more defined puddles before dropping. gemma4 · generation 2 · 1 earlier revision in the lineage below
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Brief
The canvas presents a view through a rain-streaked windowpane. Streams of falling water streak across the glass, accumulating into defined, circular puddles that distort the background. Through this continuously shifting liquid curtain, the distant view reveals tiny, inverted cityscapes. The water is constantly moving—it runs, collects, and drops—and this rhythmic action repeatedly changes the clarity, refraction, and detail of the submerged, miniature urban environment.
Artist's statement · qwen3-coder:30b-a3b-q4_K_M, unedited
This sketch simulates a rain-streaked windowpane through which a miniature cityscape is faintly visible. Falling raindrops accumulate into circular puddles that distort the background view, creating a constantly shifting refraction effect. The distant urban environment appears inverted and subtle within each droplet and puddle, revealing itself only through the liquid curtain's movement. The simulation uses simple geometric shapes to model raindrops and puddles, with the cityscape rendered once at setup and reused in each visual element to maintain performance while creating an illusion of depth and motion.
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Source
| Repository | https://github.com/profcarroll/sketchgen-gallery/tree/main/e/1711 |
|---|---|
| Raw sketch | sketch/sketch.js |
| Raw page | sketch/index.html |
| Attempts | 3 |
| Licence | CC BY 4.0 |
| Attribution | “rain on a window where each drop holds a tiny upside-down city Revise…” — sketchgen entry 1711, prompted by profcarroll, written by qwen3-coder:30b-a3b-q4_K_M under the treatment rules file. https://profcarroll.github.io/sketchgen-gallery/e/1711/ Licensed CC BY 4.0. |
Lineage · generation 2 of 5 in the line from entry 1471
rain on a window where each drop holds a tiny upside-down city
Revise: the same atmospheric movement of falling raindrops streaking across the surface of a window, and this time the cityscape visible within them subtly pulses with a gentle, slow rhythm.
Revise: the same view through the rain-streaked windowpane of tiny, upside-down cityscapes, and this time the raindrops collect into larger, more defined puddles before dropping.
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rain on a window where each drop holds a tiny upside-down city
Revise: the same atmospheric movement of falling raindrops streaking across the surface of a window, and this time the cityscape visible within them subtly pulses with a gentle, slow rhythm.
Revise: the same view through the rain-streaked windowpane of tiny, upside-down cityscapes, and this time the raindrops collect into larger, more defined puddles before dropping.
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Provenance
| Entry | 1711 |
|---|---|
| Job | 1724 |
| State | published |
| Prompt | rain on a window where each drop holds a tiny upside-down city Revise: the same atmospheric movement of falling raindrops streaking across the surface of a window, and this time the cityscape visible within them subtly pulses with a gentle, slow rhythm. Revise: the same view through the rain-streaked windowpane of tiny, upside-down cityscapes, and this time the raindrops collect into larger, more defined puddles before dropping. |
| Brief | The canvas presents a view through a rain-streaked windowpane. Streams of falling water streak across the glass, accumulating into defined, circular puddles that distort the background. Through this continuously shifting liquid curtain, the distant view reveals tiny, inverted cityscapes. The water is constantly moving—it runs, collects, and drops—and this rhythmic action repeatedly changes the clarity, refraction, and detail of the submerged, miniature urban environment. |
| Statement | This sketch simulates a rain-streaked windowpane through which a miniature cityscape is faintly visible. Falling raindrops accumulate into circular puddles that distort the background view, creating a constantly shifting refraction effect. The distant urban environment appears inverted and subtle within each droplet and puddle, revealing itself only through the liquid curtain's movement. The simulation uses simple geometric shapes to model raindrops and puddles, with the cityscape rendered once at setup and reused in each visual element to maintain performance while creating an illusion of depth and motion. |
| Submitted by | profcarroll |
| Planner | gemma4:e4b · prompt planner-v2 |
| Executor | qwen3-coder:30b-a3b-q4_K_M · prompt executor-v3 |
| Rules file | treatment |
| Assertions | motion(idle), uses(webgl) |
| Gate | attempt 1: gate exit 1 — motion(idle) pass, uses(webgl) fail attempt 2: gate exit 1 — motion(idle) pass, uses(webgl) fail attempt 3: gate exit 1 — motion(idle) pass, uses(webgl) fail |
| Attempts | 3 |
| Prompt tokens | 11338 |
| Completion tokens | 4704 |
| Wall seconds | 413.787 |
| Node shape | VM.Standard.A1.Flex 16/96 |
| Seed | 1 |
| Lineage | parent 1607 · children 1774 · generation 2 · critique by gemma4:e4b |
| Source | repository · sketch.js · index.html · attempts attempt-1, attempt-2, attempt-3 |
| Created (UTC) | 2026-09-26T22:05:00Z |
| Published (UTC) | 2026-09-27T20:25:22Z |
| Publish commit | 3bac3f37f898f70ef60dd5cda6b05535e2e26617 |
| Licence | CC BY 4.0 |
| Attribution | “rain on a window where each drop holds a tiny upside-down city Revise…” — sketchgen entry 1711, prompted by profcarroll, written by qwen3-coder:30b-a3b-q4_K_M under the treatment rules file. https://profcarroll.github.io/sketchgen-gallery/e/1711/ Licensed CC BY 4.0. |
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