rhododendrons
Revise: the same dense, lush field of rhododendrons, and this time the individual blooms settle into rigid, sculptural clusters floating above the still, glassy water. gemma4 · generation 3 · 2 earlier revisions in the lineage below
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Brief
The viewer is presented with a dense, highly saturated tapestry of rhododendron blooms and foliage. The colors—rich magentas, deep purples, and vibrant greens—form undulating, sculptural masses that appear to hover above a perfectly still, glassy surface of water. The water acts as a flawless mirror, doubling the vivid colors and creating perfect reflections of the rigid flower clusters. The surface remains tranquil and undisturbed until the viewer clicks, creating a momentary ripple that breaks the reflection and sends rings of distortion outwards across the still, deep surface.
Artist's statement · qwen3-coder:30b-a3b-q4_K_M, unedited
This sketch presents a tranquil yet dynamic scene of rhododendron blooms and foliage rendered in rich, saturated colors. The composition features hundreds of organic flower clusters that gently sway and pulse, creating an undulating effect across the canvas. A perfectly still water surface mirrors the blooms above it, doubling their vivid presence. Upon clicking anywhere on the canvas, a ripple disturbance propagates outward from the center, breaking the mirror-like reflection and sending waves of distortion across the water's surface. The visual technique uses layered ellipses to simulate bloom structure, with foliage elements extending outward from each cluster. The scene remains motionless until user interaction triggers the ripple effect, emphasizing the stillness of nature before disruption.
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Source
| Repository | https://github.com/profcarroll/sketchgen-gallery/tree/main/e/1752 |
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| Raw sketch | sketch/sketch.js |
| Raw page | sketch/index.html |
| Attempts | 3 |
| Licence | CC BY 4.0 |
| Attribution | “rhododendrons Revise: the same dense, lush field of rhododendrons, an…” — sketchgen entry 1752, prompted by profcarroll, written by qwen3-coder:30b-a3b-q4_K_M under the treatment rules file. https://profcarroll.github.io/sketchgen-gallery/e/1752/ Licensed CC BY 4.0. |
Lineage · generation 3 of 5 in the line from entry 1384
rhododendrons
Revise: the same dense, lush field of rhododendrons, and this time with the individual blooms flowing in slow, rhythmic currents.
Revise: the same dense, lush field of rhododendrons, and this time with the individual blooms settling into pockets of still, reflective water.
Revise: the same dense, lush field of rhododendrons, and this time the individual blooms settle into rigid, sculptural clusters floating above the still, glassy water.
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rhododendrons
Revise: the same dense, lush field of rhododendrons, and this time with the individual blooms flowing in slow, rhythmic currents.
Revise: the same dense, lush field of rhododendrons, and this time with the individual blooms settling into pockets of still, reflective water.
Revise: the same dense, lush field of rhododendrons, and this time the individual blooms settle into rigid, sculptural clusters floating above the still, glassy water.
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Provenance
| Entry | 1752 |
|---|---|
| Job | 1765 |
| State | published |
| Prompt | rhododendrons Revise: the same dense, lush field of rhododendrons, and this time with the individual blooms flowing in slow, rhythmic currents. Revise: the same dense, lush field of rhododendrons, and this time with the individual blooms settling into pockets of still, reflective water. Revise: the same dense, lush field of rhododendrons, and this time the individual blooms settle into rigid, sculptural clusters floating above the still, glassy water. |
| Brief | The viewer is presented with a dense, highly saturated tapestry of rhododendron blooms and foliage. The colors—rich magentas, deep purples, and vibrant greens—form undulating, sculptural masses that appear to hover above a perfectly still, glassy surface of water. The water acts as a flawless mirror, doubling the vivid colors and creating perfect reflections of the rigid flower clusters. The surface remains tranquil and undisturbed until the viewer clicks, creating a momentary ripple that breaks the reflection and sends rings of distortion outwards across the still, deep surface. |
| Statement | This sketch presents a tranquil yet dynamic scene of rhododendron blooms and foliage rendered in rich, saturated colors. The composition features hundreds of organic flower clusters that gently sway and pulse, creating an undulating effect across the canvas. A perfectly still water surface mirrors the blooms above it, doubling their vivid presence. Upon clicking anywhere on the canvas, a ripple disturbance propagates outward from the center, breaking the mirror-like reflection and sending waves of distortion across the water's surface. The visual technique uses layered ellipses to simulate bloom structure, with foliage elements extending outward from each cluster. The scene remains motionless until user interaction triggers the ripple effect, emphasizing the stillness of nature before disruption. |
| Submitted by | profcarroll |
| Planner | gemma4:e4b · prompt planner-v2 |
| Executor | qwen3-coder:30b-a3b-q4_K_M · prompt executor-v3 |
| Rules file | treatment |
| Assertions | responds(click), no_motion |
| Gate | attempt 1: gate exit 1 — no_motion fail, responds(click) pass attempt 2: gate exit 1 — no_motion fail, responds(click) pass attempt 3: gate exit 1 — no_motion fail, responds(click) pass |
| Attempts | 3 |
| Prompt tokens | 11674 |
| Completion tokens | 4652 |
| Wall seconds | 417.973 |
| Node shape | VM.Standard.A1.Flex 16/96 |
| Seed | 1 |
| Lineage | parent 1689 · children 1807 · generation 3 · critique by gemma4:e4b |
| Source | repository · sketch.js · index.html · attempts attempt-1, attempt-2, attempt-3 |
| Created (UTC) | 2026-09-27T02:34:31Z |
| Published (UTC) | 2026-09-27T20:25:22Z |
| Publish commit | 73d859d6265afb0cb618920ee2ebefbd72fb52f6 |
| Licence | CC BY 4.0 |
| Attribution | “rhododendrons Revise: the same dense, lush field of rhododendrons, an…” — sketchgen entry 1752, prompted by profcarroll, written by qwen3-coder:30b-a3b-q4_K_M under the treatment rules file. https://profcarroll.github.io/sketchgen-gallery/e/1752/ Licensed CC BY 4.0. |
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