shower thoughts
Revise: improve the animation framerate profcarroll · generation 2 · 1 earlier revision in the lineage below
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Brief
The canvas features a continuous, dynamic field of bioluminescent forms that drift and interact in fluid patterns. The primary shapes glow with vibrant colors, and a key enhancement is the appearance of visible, glowing smoke trails that consistently trail behind these moving forms. The entire composition is a mesmerizing, self-contained spectacle of light and residue. The movement is always active and evolving, creating a rich sense of perpetual motion without requiring any interaction from the viewer.
Artist's statement · qwen3-coder:30b-a3b-q4_K_M, unedited
This sketch creates a mesmerizing field of bioluminescent forms that drift and interact in fluid patterns. The composition features hundreds of glowing particles that move with organic, unpredictable motion, leaving behind luminous smoke trails that fade gracefully over time. Each form pulses through a vibrant color cycle while maintaining its own unique trajectory, creating an ever-evolving tapestry of light and shadow across the canvas. The visual effect is achieved through layered drawing techniques including semi-transparent glows, particle trails, and continuous color cycling, all within strict performance constraints to ensure smooth animation without overwhelming system resources.
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Judgment
Humans
0.47 over 1 pair
closer to its brief: 2.13 over 1 pair
Bradley–Terry over this population's pairs alone. 1.00 is the virtual reference every entry is tied against once, so few pairs pull a score toward it: read the ordering before the margin. Views and likes are engagement, not judgment, and are not in this number.
Agents
5.56 over 24 pairs
closer to its brief: 2.54 over 24 pairs
Bradley–Terry over this population's pairs alone. 1.00 is the virtual reference every entry is tied against once, so few pairs pull a score toward it: read the ordering before the margin. Views and likes are engagement, not judgment, and are not in this number.
Two populations, two scores, never one aggregate.
Source
| Repository | https://github.com/profcarroll/sketchgen-gallery/tree/main/e/253 |
|---|---|
| Raw sketch | sketch/sketch.js |
| Raw page | sketch/index.html |
| Attempts | 1 |
| Licence | CC BY 4.0 |
| Attribution | “shower thoughts Revise: the same bioluminescent shapes, and this time…” — sketchgen entry 253, prompted by profcarroll, written by qwen3-coder:30b-a3b-q4_K_M under the treatment rules file. https://profcarroll.github.io/sketchgen-gallery/e/253/ Licensed CC BY 4.0. |
Lineage · generation 2 of 8 in the line from entry 188
shower thoughts
Revise: the same bioluminescent shapes, and this time some forms have trailing, glowing smoke tails
Revise: improve the animation framerate
After this entry: 1 child
Children: entry 297.
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shower thoughts
Revise: the same bioluminescent shapes, and this time some forms have trailing, glowing smoke tails
Revise: improve the animation framerate
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Provenance
| Entry | 253 |
|---|---|
| Job | 254 |
| State | published |
| Prompt | shower thoughts Revise: the same bioluminescent shapes, and this time some forms have trailing, glowing smoke tails Revise: improve the animation framerate |
| Brief | The canvas features a continuous, dynamic field of bioluminescent forms that drift and interact in fluid patterns. The primary shapes glow with vibrant colors, and a key enhancement is the appearance of visible, glowing smoke trails that consistently trail behind these moving forms. The entire composition is a mesmerizing, self-contained spectacle of light and residue. The movement is always active and evolving, creating a rich sense of perpetual motion without requiring any interaction from the viewer. |
| Statement | This sketch creates a mesmerizing field of bioluminescent forms that drift and interact in fluid patterns. The composition features hundreds of glowing particles that move with organic, unpredictable motion, leaving behind luminous smoke trails that fade gracefully over time. Each form pulses through a vibrant color cycle while maintaining its own unique trajectory, creating an ever-evolving tapestry of light and shadow across the canvas. The visual effect is achieved through layered drawing techniques including semi-transparent glows, particle trails, and continuous color cycling, all within strict performance constraints to ensure smooth animation without overwhelming system resources. |
| Submitted by | profcarroll |
| Planner | gemma4:e4b · prompt planner-v1 |
| Executor | qwen3-coder:30b-a3b-q4_K_M · prompt executor-v2 |
| Rules file | treatment |
| Assertions | motion(idle) |
| Gate | attempt 1: gate exit 0 — motion(idle) pass |
| Attempts | 1 |
| Prompt tokens | 2191 |
| Completion tokens | 1023 |
| Wall seconds | 111.621 |
| Node shape | VM.Standard.A1.Flex 16/94 |
| Seed | 1 |
| Lineage | parent 238 · children 297 · generation 2 · critique by profcarroll |
| Source | repository · sketch.js · index.html · attempts attempt-1 |
| Created (UTC) | 2026-09-15T13:42:15Z |
| Published (UTC) | 2026-09-15T13:43:08Z |
| Publish commit | b5337d32380c52dd7a442e459f5e7f752edad21d |
| Licence | CC BY 4.0 |
| Attribution | “shower thoughts Revise: the same bioluminescent shapes, and this time…” — sketchgen entry 253, prompted by profcarroll, written by qwen3-coder:30b-a3b-q4_K_M under the treatment rules file. https://profcarroll.github.io/sketchgen-gallery/e/253/ Licensed CC BY 4.0. |
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