rain on a window where each drop holds a tiny upside-down city
Revise: the same view through a windowpane with crystalline cityscapes collected in the puddles, and this time the internal light flashes emanate outwards, creating visible ripple patterns across the crystal surface. gemma4 · generation 5 · 4 earlier revisions in the lineage below
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The canvas displays a view through a heavily rain-streaked windowpane. In the collected puddles, visible crystalline cityscapes are rendered upside down. These structures are characterized by internal, flashing lights that do not simply appear, but instead pulse outward, generating visible, radial ripple patterns across the fragile, crystalline surfaces. The movement is continuous, driven by the streaming rain and the pulsing light show within the puddles.
Artist's statement · qwen3-coder:30b-a3b-q4_K_M, unedited
This sketch depicts a rain-streaked windowpane through which viewers can see puddles collecting on the surface. Within these puddles, crystalline cityscapes appear upside down and begin to pulse with internal light flashes that radiate outward in visible ripple patterns. The effect is created by rendering cityscape graphics within each puddle and adding dynamic ripples when a raindrop impacts the puddle surface, creating a continuous animation of light pulses and reflections that simulate the interaction between water droplets and light inside the puddles.
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Source
| Repository | https://github.com/profcarroll/sketchgen-gallery/tree/main/e/1875 |
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| Raw sketch | sketch/sketch.js |
| Raw page | sketch/index.html |
| Attempts | 1 |
| Licence | CC BY 4.0 |
| Attribution | “rain on a window where each drop holds a tiny upside-down city Revise…” — sketchgen entry 1875, prompted by profcarroll, written by qwen3-coder:30b-a3b-q4_K_M under the treatment rules file. https://profcarroll.github.io/sketchgen-gallery/e/1875/ Licensed CC BY 4.0. |
Lineage · generation 5 of 5 in the line from entry 1471
rain on a window where each drop holds a tiny upside-down city
2 generations folded · 1607, 1711 · all by gemma4
Revise: the same atmospheric movement of falling raindrops streaking across the surface of a window, and this time the cityscape visible within them subtly pulses with a gentle, slow rhythm.
Revise: the same view through the rain-streaked windowpane of tiny, upside-down cityscapes, and this time the raindrops collect into larger, more defined puddles before dropping.
Revise: the same view through a rain-streaked windowpane, and this time the inverted cityscapes visible within the puddles gain sharp, crystalline edges.
Revise: the same view through a windowpane covered in streaming, streaked raindrops, and this time the crystalline forms within the puddles emit subtle flashes of internal light upon impact.
Revise: the same view through a windowpane with crystalline cityscapes collected in the puddles, and this time the internal light flashes emanate outwards, creating visible ripple patterns across the crystal surface.
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Provenance
| Entry | 1875 |
|---|---|
| Job | 1888 |
| State | rejected |
| Prompt | rain on a window where each drop holds a tiny upside-down city Revise: the same atmospheric movement of falling raindrops streaking across the surface of a window, and this time the cityscape visible within them subtly pulses with a gentle, slow rhythm. Revise: the same view through the rain-streaked windowpane of tiny, upside-down cityscapes, and this time the raindrops collect into larger, more defined puddles before dropping. Revise: the same view through a rain-streaked windowpane, and this time the inverted cityscapes visible within the puddles gain sharp, crystalline edges. Revise: the same view through a windowpane covered in streaming, streaked raindrops, and this time the crystalline forms within the puddles emit subtle flashes of internal light upon impact. Revise: the same view through a windowpane with crystalline cityscapes collected in the puddles, and this time the internal light flashes emanate outwards, creating visible ripple patterns across the crystal surface. |
| Brief | The canvas displays a view through a heavily rain-streaked windowpane. In the collected puddles, visible crystalline cityscapes are rendered upside down. These structures are characterized by internal, flashing lights that do not simply appear, but instead pulse outward, generating visible, radial ripple patterns across the fragile, crystalline surfaces. The movement is continuous, driven by the streaming rain and the pulsing light show within the puddles. |
| Statement | This sketch depicts a rain-streaked windowpane through which viewers can see puddles collecting on the surface. Within these puddles, crystalline cityscapes appear upside down and begin to pulse with internal light flashes that radiate outward in visible ripple patterns. The effect is created by rendering cityscape graphics within each puddle and adding dynamic ripples when a raindrop impacts the puddle surface, creating a continuous animation of light pulses and reflections that simulate the interaction between water droplets and light inside the puddles. |
| Submitted by | profcarroll |
| Planner | gemma4:e4b · prompt planner-v2 |
| Executor | qwen3-coder:30b-a3b-q4_K_M · prompt executor-v3 |
| Rules file | treatment |
| Assertions | motion(idle) |
| Gate | attempt 1: gate exit 0 — motion(idle) pass |
| Attempts | 1 |
| Prompt tokens | 4391 |
| Completion tokens | 2090 |
| Wall seconds | 191.266 |
| Node shape | VM.Standard.A1.Flex 16/96 |
| Seed | 1 |
| Lineage | parent 1829 · children none · generation 5 · critique by gemma4:e4b |
| Revised from | entry 1829's sketch, 216 lines |
| Source | repository · sketch.js · index.html · attempts attempt-1 |
| Created (UTC) | 2026-10-04T19:27:39Z |
| Published (UTC) | 2026-10-05T03:54:12Z |
| Publish commit | 6cc9ad8b3d19ae5271d0b96ee75d5f4716275c13 |
| Licence | CC BY 4.0 |
| Attribution | “rain on a window where each drop holds a tiny upside-down city Revise…” — sketchgen entry 1875, prompted by profcarroll, written by qwen3-coder:30b-a3b-q4_K_M under the treatment rules file. https://profcarroll.github.io/sketchgen-gallery/e/1875/ Licensed CC BY 4.0. |
| Last error | rejected by operator |
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