Depict a scene from the motion picture "2001: A Space Odyssey"
Revise: the same monolith, and this time enhance the deep blue stellar dust to make the background feel less void-like gemma4 · generation 2 · 1 earlier revision in the lineage below
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The scene depicts a gigantic, stark black monolith suspended in deep space, slowly and subtly rotating on its axis. The background is a rich, dynamic tapestry of stellar dust—rendered in vibrant deep blue and indigo hues—which fills the void with visible, flowing clouds and distant constellations. The canvas continuously displays the mesmerizing interaction between the rotating geometry of the monolith and the slow, atmospheric drift of the surrounding stellar nebula. The overall impression is of vast, silent, celestial grandeur, creating a perpetual sense of cosmic motion without requiring any input from the viewer.
Artist's statement · qwen3-coder:30b-a3b-q4_K_M, unedited
This sketch depicts a colossal black monolith floating in the depths of space, rotating slowly and subtly. The scene is rendered using WebGL for immersive 3D visuals, with the monolith depicted as a tall, narrow rectangular prism that gently spins on its axis. Surrounding the monolith is a rich tapestry of stellar dust—generated from thousands of individual particles that flow and drift through space in a continuous, mesmerizing motion. The background is filled with vibrant deep blue and indigo hues, creating an atmospheric nebula that enhances the cosmic grandeur of the scene. The viewer observes a sense of perpetual celestial motion without any input required, capturing the awe-inspiring silence and vastness of outer space.
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Judgment
Humans
2.13 over 1 pair
closer to its brief: 2.13 over 1 pair
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0.29 over 28 pairs
closer to its brief: 0.24 over 28 pairs
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Source
| Repository | https://github.com/profcarroll/sketchgen-gallery/tree/main/e/465 |
|---|---|
| Raw sketch | sketch/sketch.js |
| Raw page | sketch/index.html |
| Attempts | 2 |
| Licence | CC BY 4.0 |
| Attribution | “Depict a scene from the motion picture "2001: A Space Odyssey" Revise…” — sketchgen entry 465, prompted by profcarroll, written by qwen3-coder:30b-a3b-q4_K_M under the treatment rules file. https://profcarroll.github.io/sketchgen-gallery/e/465/ Licensed CC BY 4.0. |
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Depict a scene from the motion picture "2001: A Space Odyssey"
Revise: the same interstellar monolith, and this time subtly shift its angle of rotation
Revise: the same monolith, and this time enhance the deep blue stellar dust to make the background feel less void-like
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Depict a scene from the motion picture "2001: A Space Odyssey"
Revise: the same interstellar monolith, and this time subtly shift its angle of rotation
Revise: the same monolith, and this time enhance the deep blue stellar dust to make the background feel less void-like
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Provenance
| Entry | 465 |
|---|---|
| Job | 466 |
| State | published |
| Prompt | Depict a scene from the motion picture "2001: A Space Odyssey" Revise: the same interstellar monolith, and this time subtly shift its angle of rotation Revise: the same monolith, and this time enhance the deep blue stellar dust to make the background feel less void-like |
| Brief | The scene depicts a gigantic, stark black monolith suspended in deep space, slowly and subtly rotating on its axis. The background is a rich, dynamic tapestry of stellar dust—rendered in vibrant deep blue and indigo hues—which fills the void with visible, flowing clouds and distant constellations. The canvas continuously displays the mesmerizing interaction between the rotating geometry of the monolith and the slow, atmospheric drift of the surrounding stellar nebula. The overall impression is of vast, silent, celestial grandeur, creating a perpetual sense of cosmic motion without requiring any input from the viewer. |
| Statement | This sketch depicts a colossal black monolith floating in the depths of space, rotating slowly and subtly. The scene is rendered using WebGL for immersive 3D visuals, with the monolith depicted as a tall, narrow rectangular prism that gently spins on its axis. Surrounding the monolith is a rich tapestry of stellar dust—generated from thousands of individual particles that flow and drift through space in a continuous, mesmerizing motion. The background is filled with vibrant deep blue and indigo hues, creating an atmospheric nebula that enhances the cosmic grandeur of the scene. The viewer observes a sense of perpetual celestial motion without any input required, capturing the awe-inspiring silence and vastness of outer space. |
| Submitted by | profcarroll |
| Planner | gemma4:e4b · prompt planner-v1 |
| Executor | qwen3-coder:30b-a3b-q4_K_M · prompt executor-v2 |
| Rules file | treatment |
| Assertions | motion(idle), uses(webgl) |
| Gate | attempt 1: gate exit 1 attempt 2: gate exit 0 — motion(idle) pass, uses(webgl) pass |
| Attempts | 2 |
| Prompt tokens | 4604 |
| Completion tokens | 1527 |
| Wall seconds | 146.876 |
| Node shape | VM.Standard.A1.Flex 16/94 |
| Seed | 1 |
| Lineage | parent 415 · children none · generation 2 · critique by gemma4:e4b |
| Source | repository · sketch.js · index.html · attempts attempt-1, attempt-2 |
| Created (UTC) | 2026-09-16T10:42:31Z |
| Published (UTC) | 2026-09-16T13:32:06Z |
| Publish commit | 5ce9c90022ef7a6b1d3a9c47fc5c11d248008579 |
| Licence | CC BY 4.0 |
| Attribution | “Depict a scene from the motion picture "2001: A Space Odyssey" Revise…” — sketchgen entry 465, prompted by profcarroll, written by qwen3-coder:30b-a3b-q4_K_M under the treatment rules file. https://profcarroll.github.io/sketchgen-gallery/e/465/ Licensed CC BY 4.0. |
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