shower thoughts
Revise: the same bioluminescent forms, and this time when their glowing smoke tails pass near one another, they momentarily form visible, connecting bridges of light. gemma4 · generation 8 · 7 earlier revisions in the lineage below
Rejected by the operator: derivative, over-used visual effect
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Brief
The canvas displays an array of bioluminescent forms suspended in darkness. These shapes constantly pulse and drift, emanating visible, glowing smoke tails. The forms cycle through colors, subtly shifting between blue and deep purple. The smoky tails are highly interactive: they gather into visible clusters and can momentarily form glowing bridges of light when they pass near other forms. Furthermore, the tails ripple with visible, rhythmic pulses, giving the entire field a dynamic, self-sustaining life.
Artist's statement · qwen3-coder:30b-a3b-q4_K_M, unedited
This sketch creates an immersive field of bioluminescent forms that drift and pulse in darkness. Each form gently moves across the canvas, leaving glowing smoke-like tails behind them. The forms cycle through subtle color shifts between deep blue and purple, with pulsing effects that make them appear to breathe. The interactive elements include the smoke tails that gather into visible clusters and can momentarily form glowing bridges of light when they pass near other forms. These connections ripple with rhythmic pulses, creating a dynamic, self-sustaining ecosystem of light that moves organically across the screen without any user input.
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Source
| Repository | https://github.com/profcarroll/sketchgen-gallery/tree/main/e/588 |
|---|---|
| Raw sketch | sketch/sketch.js |
| Raw page | sketch/index.html |
| Attempts | 1 |
| Licence | CC BY 4.0 |
| Attribution | “shower thoughts Revise: the same bioluminescent shapes, and this time…” — sketchgen entry 588, prompted by profcarroll, written by qwen3-coder:30b-a3b-q4_K_M under the treatment rules file. https://profcarroll.github.io/sketchgen-gallery/e/588/ Licensed CC BY 4.0. |
Lineage · generation 8 of 8 in the line from entry 188
shower thoughts
5 generations folded · 238, 253, 297, 334, 378 · by gemma4 and profcarroll
Revise: the same bioluminescent shapes, and this time some forms have trailing, glowing smoke tails
Revise: improve the animation framerate
Revise: the same bioluminescent forms, and this time they will react to subtle changes in the background darkness
Revise: the same bioluminescent shapes, and this time the glowing smoke tails will change thickness and intensity as they drift
Revise: the same bioluminescent shapes, and this time some forms will briefly change color from blue to purple
Revise: the same bioluminescent shapes, and this time they will generate visible, rhythmic pulses that ripple outward through their tails.
Revise: the same bioluminescent forms, and this time the glowing smoke tails will temporarily gather together into visible, shifting clusters.
Revise: the same bioluminescent forms, and this time when their glowing smoke tails pass near one another, they momentarily form visible, connecting bridges of light.
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Provenance
| Entry | 588 |
|---|---|
| Job | 589 |
| State | rejected |
| Prompt | shower thoughts Revise: the same bioluminescent shapes, and this time some forms have trailing, glowing smoke tails Revise: improve the animation framerate Revise: the same bioluminescent forms, and this time they will react to subtle changes in the background darkness Revise: the same bioluminescent shapes, and this time the glowing smoke tails will change thickness and intensity as they drift Revise: the same bioluminescent shapes, and this time some forms will briefly change color from blue to purple Revise: the same bioluminescent shapes, and this time they will generate visible, rhythmic pulses that ripple outward through their tails. Revise: the same bioluminescent forms, and this time the glowing smoke tails will temporarily gather together into visible, shifting clusters. Revise: the same bioluminescent forms, and this time when their glowing smoke tails pass near one another, they momentarily form visible, connecting bridges of light. |
| Brief | The canvas displays an array of bioluminescent forms suspended in darkness. These shapes constantly pulse and drift, emanating visible, glowing smoke tails. The forms cycle through colors, subtly shifting between blue and deep purple. The smoky tails are highly interactive: they gather into visible clusters and can momentarily form glowing bridges of light when they pass near other forms. Furthermore, the tails ripple with visible, rhythmic pulses, giving the entire field a dynamic, self-sustaining life. |
| Statement | This sketch creates an immersive field of bioluminescent forms that drift and pulse in darkness. Each form gently moves across the canvas, leaving glowing smoke-like tails behind them. The forms cycle through subtle color shifts between deep blue and purple, with pulsing effects that make them appear to breathe. The interactive elements include the smoke tails that gather into visible clusters and can momentarily form glowing bridges of light when they pass near other forms. These connections ripple with rhythmic pulses, creating a dynamic, self-sustaining ecosystem of light that moves organically across the screen without any user input. |
| Submitted by | profcarroll |
| Planner | gemma4:e4b · prompt planner-v1 |
| Executor | qwen3-coder:30b-a3b-q4_K_M · prompt executor-v2 |
| Rules file | treatment |
| Assertions | motion(idle) |
| Gate | attempt 1: gate exit 0 — motion(idle) pass |
| Attempts | 1 |
| Prompt tokens | 2198 |
| Completion tokens | 1079 |
| Wall seconds | 119.924 |
| Node shape | VM.Standard.A1.Flex 16/94 |
| Seed | 1 |
| Lineage | parent 483 · children none · generation 8 · critique by gemma4:e4b |
| Source | repository · sketch.js · index.html · attempts attempt-1 |
| Created (UTC) | 2026-09-17T03:38:19Z |
| Published (UTC) | 2026-09-17T03:38:45Z |
| Publish commit | 204e71f602e25bd0821f88f822501b5c2a0bf550 |
| Licence | CC BY 4.0 |
| Attribution | “shower thoughts Revise: the same bioluminescent shapes, and this time…” — sketchgen entry 588, prompted by profcarroll, written by qwen3-coder:30b-a3b-q4_K_M under the treatment rules file. https://profcarroll.github.io/sketchgen-gallery/e/588/ Licensed CC BY 4.0. |
| Last error | derivative, over-used visual effect |
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