safari landscape
Revise: the same arid savanna, and this time deepening the dramatic shadows within the cracks and fissures. gemma4 · generation 11 · 10 earlier revisions in the lineage below
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The canvas presents a vast, arid savanna dominated by deep terracotta earth tones, which are highly textured with visible cracks and fissures. The landscape features fewer low scrub shapes and is capped by a pale beige sky, behind which stands a pronounced, distant rock formation. The light is cast at a dramatically low angle, exaggerating deep shadows within the cracked earth. Movement is provided by faint dust devils that drift across the ground, occasionally coalescing into larger, swirling patterns, creating an overall sense of intense, monochromatic stillness and motion.
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This sketch renders a monochromatic savanna landscape dominated by deep terracotta earth tones with visible cracks and fissures. The scene features a pale beige sky above and a dramatic low-angle light source that casts long shadows across the cracked terrain. Faint dust devils drift across the ground in spiral patterns, occasionally coalescing into larger swirling formations. The composition captures an intense sense of stillness punctuated by subtle movement, with the constant animation of the dust devils providing dynamic contrast to the static landscape. The technique uses a combination of pre-generated cracked earth elements and particle-based dust devil systems that evolve over time.
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Source
| Repository | https://github.com/profcarroll/sketchgen-gallery/tree/main/e/596 |
|---|---|
| Raw sketch | sketch/sketch.js |
| Raw page | sketch/index.html |
| Attempts | 1 |
| Licence | CC BY 4.0 |
| Attribution | “safari landscape Revise: redraw without water safari is typically ass…” — sketchgen entry 596, prompted by profcarroll, written by qwen3-coder:30b-a3b-q4_K_M under the treatment rules file. https://profcarroll.github.io/sketchgen-gallery/e/596/ Licensed CC BY 4.0. |
Lineage · generation 11 of 16 in the line from entry 104
safari landscape
8 generations folded · 109, 159, 218, 262, 305, 340, 386, 388 · by profcarroll and gemma4
Revise: redraw without water safari is typically associated to arrid enviornments and the acacia tree,
Revise: the same arid expanse, and this time deep terracotta earth tones replacing the dusty browns
Revise: the same arid expanse, and this time fewer low scrub shapes
Revise: the same arid expanse, and this time slight dust devils drifting across the terracotta ground
Revise: the same arid landscape, and this time increasing the contrast between the terracotta ground and the beige sky
Revise: the same arid expanse, and this time enhancing the texture of the terracotta ground with visible cracks and fissures
Revise: the same arid expanse, and this time having the faint dust devils gather into larger, more organized swirling patterns.
Revise: reconsider the depiction of the sky and lack of texture on the earth
Revise: the same arid landscape, and this time establishing a more pronounced, distant rock formation breaking the horizon line.
Revise: the same arid landscape, and this time casting the light at a lower angle to exaggerate the shadows within the cracks and fissures.
Revise: the same arid savanna, and this time deepening the dramatic shadows within the cracks and fissures.
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safari landscape
Revise: redraw without water safari is typically associated to arrid enviornments and the acacia tree,
Revise: the same arid expanse, and this time deep terracotta earth tones replacing the dusty browns
Revise: the same arid expanse, and this time fewer low scrub shapes
Revise: the same arid expanse, and this time slight dust devils drifting across the terracotta ground
Revise: the same arid landscape, and this time increasing the contrast between the terracotta ground and the beige sky
Revise: the same arid expanse, and this time enhancing the texture of the terracotta ground with visible cracks and fissures
Revise: the same arid expanse, and this time having the faint dust devils gather into larger, more organized swirling patterns.
Revise: reconsider the depiction of the sky and lack of texture on the earth
Revise: the same arid landscape, and this time establishing a more pronounced, distant rock formation breaking the horizon line.
Revise: the same arid landscape, and this time casting the light at a lower angle to exaggerate the shadows within the cracks and fissures.
Revise: the same arid savanna, and this time deepening the dramatic shadows within the cracks and fissures.
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Provenance
| Entry | 596 |
|---|---|
| Job | 597 |
| State | published |
| Prompt | safari landscape Revise: redraw without water safari is typically associated to arrid enviornments and the acacia tree, Revise: the same arid expanse, and this time deep terracotta earth tones replacing the dusty browns Revise: the same arid expanse, and this time fewer low scrub shapes Revise: the same arid expanse, and this time slight dust devils drifting across the terracotta ground Revise: the same arid landscape, and this time increasing the contrast between the terracotta ground and the beige sky Revise: the same arid expanse, and this time enhancing the texture of the terracotta ground with visible cracks and fissures Revise: the same arid expanse, and this time having the faint dust devils gather into larger, more organized swirling patterns. Revise: reconsider the depiction of the sky and lack of texture on the earth Revise: the same arid landscape, and this time establishing a more pronounced, distant rock formation breaking the horizon line. Revise: the same arid landscape, and this time casting the light at a lower angle to exaggerate the shadows within the cracks and fissures. Revise: the same arid savanna, and this time deepening the dramatic shadows within the cracks and fissures. |
| Brief | The canvas presents a vast, arid savanna dominated by deep terracotta earth tones, which are highly textured with visible cracks and fissures. The landscape features fewer low scrub shapes and is capped by a pale beige sky, behind which stands a pronounced, distant rock formation. The light is cast at a dramatically low angle, exaggerating deep shadows within the cracked earth. Movement is provided by faint dust devils that drift across the ground, occasionally coalescing into larger, swirling patterns, creating an overall sense of intense, monochromatic stillness and motion. |
| Statement | This sketch renders a monochromatic savanna landscape dominated by deep terracotta earth tones with visible cracks and fissures. The scene features a pale beige sky above and a dramatic low-angle light source that casts long shadows across the cracked terrain. Faint dust devils drift across the ground in spiral patterns, occasionally coalescing into larger swirling formations. The composition captures an intense sense of stillness punctuated by subtle movement, with the constant animation of the dust devils providing dynamic contrast to the static landscape. The technique uses a combination of pre-generated cracked earth elements and particle-based dust devil systems that evolve over time. |
| Submitted by | profcarroll |
| Planner | gemma4:e4b · prompt planner-v1 |
| Executor | qwen3-coder:30b-a3b-q4_K_M · prompt executor-v2 |
| Rules file | treatment |
| Assertions | motion(idle) |
| Gate | attempt 1: gate exit 0 — motion(idle) pass |
| Attempts | 1 |
| Prompt tokens | 2215 |
| Completion tokens | 999 |
| Wall seconds | 103.261 |
| Node shape | VM.Standard.A1.Flex 16/94 |
| Seed | 1 |
| Lineage | parent 486 · children 682 · generation 11 · critique by gemma4:e4b |
| Source | repository · sketch.js · index.html · attempts attempt-1 |
| Created (UTC) | 2026-09-17T04:30:09Z |
| Published (UTC) | 2026-09-17T05:20:03Z |
| Publish commit | 08eb9072d3f9886ad76a7c701ba54f496801811a |
| Licence | CC BY 4.0 |
| Attribution | “safari landscape Revise: redraw without water safari is typically ass…” — sketchgen entry 596, prompted by profcarroll, written by qwen3-coder:30b-a3b-q4_K_M under the treatment rules file. https://profcarroll.github.io/sketchgen-gallery/e/596/ Licensed CC BY 4.0. |
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