safari landscape

Revise: the same arid savanna, and this time deepening the dramatic shadows within the cracks and fissures. gemma4 · generation 12 · 11 earlier revisions in the lineage below

Prompt by profcarroll. Planned by gemma4:e4b, written by qwen3-coder:30b-a3b-q4_K_M.

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Brief

The canvas depicts an expansive, dramatic arid savanna under a pale beige sky. The foreground is dominated by deep terracotta earth, heavily textured with visible cracks and fissures. A distant, rugged rock formation anchors the horizon. The scene is lit by a low, powerful sun, casting exaggerated shadows into the ground's complex surface. Subtle low scrub and sparse acacias dot the arid terrain. The only motion comes from dust devils that slowly drift across the ground, occasionally gathering into larger, mesmerizing swirling patterns, providing a quiet, rhythmic life to the still landscape.

Artist's statement · qwen3-coder:30b-a3b-q4_K_M, unedited

This sketch renders a dramatic arid savanna landscape under a pale beige sky, featuring deep terracotta earth with visible cracks and fissures. The composition includes a distant, rugged rock formation anchoring the horizon, lit by a low sun that casts exaggerated shadows across the textured ground. The scene is populated with sparse scrub and acacia-like vegetation, while subtle dust devils drift slowly across the landscape, occasionally forming mesmerizing swirling patterns. The only motion comes from these floating dust devils, creating a quiet, rhythmic life within the still terrain. The technique uses layered shapes with varying stroke weights and fills to create depth and texture, with procedural elements for the cracks and moving particles.

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1.31 over 17 pairs

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Source

Repository	https://github.com/profcarroll/sketchgen-gallery/tree/main/e/682
Raw sketch	sketch/sketch.js
Raw page	sketch/index.html
Attempts	1
Licence	CC BY 4.0
Attribution	“safari landscape Revise: redraw without water safari is typically ass…” — sketchgen entry 682, prompted by profcarroll, written by qwen3-coder:30b-a3b-q4_K_M under the treatment rules file. https://profcarroll.github.io/sketchgen-gallery/e/682/ Licensed CC BY 4.0.

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Lineage · generation 12 of 16 in the line from entry 104

safari landscape
entry 104 · root · profcarroll
9 generations folded · 109, 159, 218, 262, 305, 340, 386, 388, 445 · by profcarroll and gemma4
1. Revise: redraw without water safari is typically associated to arrid enviornments and the acacia tree,
  entry 109 · generation 1 · profcarroll
2. Revise: the same arid expanse, and this time deep terracotta earth tones replacing the dusty browns
  entry 159 · generation 2 · gemma4
3. Revise: the same arid expanse, and this time fewer low scrub shapes
  entry 218 · generation 3 · gemma4
4. Revise: the same arid expanse, and this time slight dust devils drifting across the terracotta ground
  entry 262 · generation 4 · gemma4
5. Revise: the same arid landscape, and this time increasing the contrast between the terracotta ground and the beige sky
  entry 305 · generation 5 · gemma4
6. Revise: the same arid expanse, and this time enhancing the texture of the terracotta ground with visible cracks and fissures
  entry 340 · generation 6 · gemma4
7. Revise: the same arid expanse, and this time having the faint dust devils gather into larger, more organized swirling patterns.
  entry 386 · generation 7 · gemma4
8. Revise: reconsider the depiction of the sky and lack of texture on the earth
  entry 388 · generation 8 · profcarroll
9. Revise: the same arid landscape, and this time establishing a more pronounced, distant rock formation breaking the horizon line.
  entry 445 · generation 9 · gemma4
Revise: the same arid landscape, and this time casting the light at a lower angle to exaggerate the shadows within the cracks and fissures.
entry 486 · generation 10 · gemma4
Revise: the same arid savanna, and this time deepening the dramatic shadows within the cracks and fissures.
entry 596 · generation 11 · gemma4
Revise: the same arid savanna, and this time deepening the dramatic shadows within the cracks and fissures.
entry 682 · generation 12 · gemma4

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Children: entry 754.

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Provenance

Entry	682
Job	683
State	published
Prompt	safari landscape Revise: redraw without water safari is typically associated to arrid enviornments and the acacia tree, Revise: the same arid expanse, and this time deep terracotta earth tones replacing the dusty browns Revise: the same arid expanse, and this time fewer low scrub shapes Revise: the same arid expanse, and this time slight dust devils drifting across the terracotta ground Revise: the same arid landscape, and this time increasing the contrast between the terracotta ground and the beige sky Revise: the same arid expanse, and this time enhancing the texture of the terracotta ground with visible cracks and fissures Revise: the same arid expanse, and this time having the faint dust devils gather into larger, more organized swirling patterns. Revise: reconsider the depiction of the sky and lack of texture on the earth Revise: the same arid landscape, and this time establishing a more pronounced, distant rock formation breaking the horizon line. Revise: the same arid landscape, and this time casting the light at a lower angle to exaggerate the shadows within the cracks and fissures. Revise: the same arid savanna, and this time deepening the dramatic shadows within the cracks and fissures. Revise: the same arid savanna, and this time deepening the dramatic shadows within the cracks and fissures.
Brief	The canvas depicts an expansive, dramatic arid savanna under a pale beige sky. The foreground is dominated by deep terracotta earth, heavily textured with visible cracks and fissures. A distant, rugged rock formation anchors the horizon. The scene is lit by a low, powerful sun, casting exaggerated shadows into the ground's complex surface. Subtle low scrub and sparse acacias dot the arid terrain. The only motion comes from dust devils that slowly drift across the ground, occasionally gathering into larger, mesmerizing swirling patterns, providing a quiet, rhythmic life to the still landscape.
Statement	This sketch renders a dramatic arid savanna landscape under a pale beige sky, featuring deep terracotta earth with visible cracks and fissures. The composition includes a distant, rugged rock formation anchoring the horizon, lit by a low sun that casts exaggerated shadows across the textured ground. The scene is populated with sparse scrub and acacia-like vegetation, while subtle dust devils drift slowly across the landscape, occasionally forming mesmerizing swirling patterns. The only motion comes from these floating dust devils, creating a quiet, rhythmic life within the still terrain. The technique uses layered shapes with varying stroke weights and fills to create depth and texture, with procedural elements for the cracks and moving particles.
Submitted by	profcarroll
Planner	gemma4:e4b · prompt planner-v1
Executor	qwen3-coder:30b-a3b-q4_K_M · prompt executor-v2
Rules file	treatment
Assertions	motion(idle)
Gate	attempt 1: gate exit 0 — motion(idle) pass
Attempts	1
Prompt tokens	2220
Completion tokens	1460
Wall seconds	130.356
Node shape	VM.Standard.A1.Flex 16/94
Seed	1
Lineage	parent 596 · children 754 · generation 12 · critique by gemma4:e4b
Source	repository · sketch.js · index.html · attempts attempt-1
Created (UTC)	2026-09-17T14:33:25Z
Published (UTC)	2026-09-17T22:44:14Z
Publish commit	deb01ee8f9f29d699da3d820812084e9599790d1
Licence	CC BY 4.0
Attribution	“safari landscape Revise: redraw without water safari is typically ass…” — sketchgen entry 682, prompted by profcarroll, written by qwen3-coder:30b-a3b-q4_K_M under the treatment rules file. https://profcarroll.github.io/sketchgen-gallery/e/682/ Licensed CC BY 4.0.

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