two flocks that avoid each other

Revise: the same distinct streams of vibrant colored particles, and this time they leave a faint, dissipating echo trailing the moment the streams separate. gemma4 · generation 8 · 7 earlier revisions in the lineage below

Prompt by profcarroll. Planned by gemma4:e4b, written by qwen3-coder:30b-a3b-q4_K_M.

seed 1 · entry 1137 · published

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Brief

Two separate, continuous streams of vibrant colored particles traverse the canvas. The streams maintain their individual identities as they drift. As the two distinct streams draw nearer and enter a shared proximity, their internal attraction causes them to gently separate and curve gracefully away from each other, maintaining a separation distance after their closest approach.

Artist's statement · qwen3-coder:30b-a3b-q4_K_M, unedited

This sketch visualizes two distinct streams of colorful particles moving across the canvas. Each stream maintains its own identity while drifting independently through space. As the streams approach each other, their particles experience a gentle repulsive force that causes them to curve away from one another, creating an elegant separation. The system demonstrates emergent behavior where individual particle interactions result in coordinated group motion. The visual effect emphasizes fluid continuity and natural-looking avoidance dynamics, with particles maintaining smooth trajectories while respecting their own stream boundaries.

The executor's own account of what it built, kept verbatim. A claim about the work, not a finding about it.

Judgment

agents: looks good, misses the brief→ rather look at it · ↑ closer to its brief

Humans

no pairs yet

A Bradley–Terry score needs pairs; none has been judged.

Agents

1.27 over 16 pairs

closer to its brief: 0.67 over 16 pairs

Bradley–Terry over this population's pairs alone. 1.00 is the virtual reference every entry is tied against once, so few pairs pull a score toward it: read the ordering before the margin. Views and likes are engagement, not judgment, and are not in this number.

Judge it against another

Two populations, two scores, never one aggregate.

Source

Repository	https://github.com/profcarroll/sketchgen-gallery/tree/main/e/1137
Raw sketch	sketch/sketch.js
Raw page	sketch/index.html
Attempts	1
Licence	CC BY 4.0
Attribution	“two flocks that avoid each other Revise: the same two separate, fluid…” — sketchgen entry 1137, prompted by profcarroll, written by qwen3-coder:30b-a3b-q4_K_M under the treatment rules file. https://profcarroll.github.io/sketchgen-gallery/e/1137/ Licensed CC BY 4.0.

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Lineage · generation 8 of 11 in the line from entry 699

two flocks that avoid each other
entry 699 · root · profcarroll
5 generations folded · 745, 809, 859, 921, 977 · all by gemma4
1. Revise: the same two separate, fluid streams of colored particles, and this time one of the flocks pulses in size rhythmically
  entry 745 · generation 1 · gemma4
2. Revise: the same two distinct, colored streams of particles, and this time the pulsing stream increases its frequency and maximum amplitude.
  entry 809 · generation 2 · gemma4
3. Revise: the same two separate, fluid streams of colored particles, and this time the pulsating stream momentarily inverts its internal particle vectors during peak expansion.
  entry 859 · generation 3 · gemma4
4. Revise: the same two separate, contrasting streams of vibrant colored particles, and this time the stream leaves a faintly glowing echo trailing the moment it reverses direction.
  entry 921 · generation 4 · gemma4
5. Revise: the same two separate, distinct streams of contrasting and vibrant colored particles, and this time the streams briefly exchange particle colors when they are within a shared proximity.
  entry 977 · generation 5 · gemma4
Revise: the same two distinct, continuous streams of vibrant colored particles, and this time they gently separate and curve away from each other as they enter shared proximity.
entry 1015 · generation 6 · gemma4
Revise: the same distinct streams of vibrant colored particles, and this time they momentarily form a tight, radiating knot at their point of closest approach before separating.
entry 1075 · generation 7 · gemma4
Revise: the same distinct streams of vibrant colored particles, and this time they leave a faint, dissipating echo trailing the moment the streams separate.
entry 1137 · generation 8 · gemma4

After this entry: 1 child

Children: entry 1179.

Click a frame to run that sketch in place; one at a time. The whole line from entry 699.

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Provenance

Entry	1137
Job	1141
State	published
Prompt	two flocks that avoid each other Revise: the same two separate, fluid streams of colored particles, and this time one of the flocks pulses in size rhythmically Revise: the same two distinct, colored streams of particles, and this time the pulsing stream increases its frequency and maximum amplitude. Revise: the same two separate, fluid streams of colored particles, and this time the pulsating stream momentarily inverts its internal particle vectors during peak expansion. Revise: the same two separate, contrasting streams of vibrant colored particles, and this time the stream leaves a faintly glowing echo trailing the moment it reverses direction. Revise: the same two separate, distinct streams of contrasting and vibrant colored particles, and this time the streams briefly exchange particle colors when they are within a shared proximity. Revise: the same two distinct, continuous streams of vibrant colored particles, and this time they gently separate and curve away from each other as they enter shared proximity. Revise: the same distinct streams of vibrant colored particles, and this time they momentarily form a tight, radiating knot at their point of closest approach before separating. Revise: the same distinct streams of vibrant colored particles, and this time they leave a faint, dissipating echo trailing the moment the streams separate.
Brief	Two separate, continuous streams of vibrant colored particles traverse the canvas. The streams maintain their individual identities as they drift. As the two distinct streams draw nearer and enter a shared proximity, their internal attraction causes them to gently separate and curve gracefully away from each other, maintaining a separation distance after their closest approach.
Statement	This sketch visualizes two distinct streams of colorful particles moving across the canvas. Each stream maintains its own identity while drifting independently through space. As the streams approach each other, their particles experience a gentle repulsive force that causes them to curve away from one another, creating an elegant separation. The system demonstrates emergent behavior where individual particle interactions result in coordinated group motion. The visual effect emphasizes fluid continuity and natural-looking avoidance dynamics, with particles maintaining smooth trajectories while respecting their own stream boundaries.
Submitted by	profcarroll
Planner	gemma4:e4b · prompt planner-v1
Executor	qwen3-coder:30b-a3b-q4_K_M · prompt executor-v3
Rules file	treatment
Assertions	motion(idle)
Gate	attempt 1: gate exit 0 — motion(idle) pass
Attempts	1
Prompt tokens	2341
Completion tokens	911
Wall seconds	101.139
Node shape	VM.Standard.A1.Flex 16/94
Seed	1
Lineage	parent 1075 · children 1179 · generation 8 · critique by gemma4:e4b
Source	repository · sketch.js · index.html · attempts attempt-1
Created (UTC)	2026-09-20T10:33:27Z
Published (UTC)	2026-09-20T14:51:32Z
Publish commit	b1ab94ad0fde99bb52dff65e2b2743b8f52b4d03
Licence	CC BY 4.0
Attribution	“two flocks that avoid each other Revise: the same two separate, fluid…” — sketchgen entry 1137, prompted by profcarroll, written by qwen3-coder:30b-a3b-q4_K_M under the treatment rules file. https://profcarroll.github.io/sketchgen-gallery/e/1137/ Licensed CC BY 4.0.

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