drone POV fly through an abandoned brutalist campus
Revise: carry: sharp, luminous linearity given to the petrified root systems of an ancient forest, seen at the scale of an abandoned cathedral, driven by the mechanism of a spring under tension. gemma4 · generation 3 · 2 earlier revisions in the lineage below
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A first-person perspective glides through a cavernous, cathedral-scale void filled with petrified root systems. These roots are rendered as sharp, luminous linear filaments that pulse and snap with the rhythmic, mechanical energy of a spring under tension. The scene moves continuously through the dark space, creating a sense of steady, automated progression through a landscape of glowing, energetic lines.
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This sketch renders an immersive, cathedral-scale void filled with petrified root systems that pulse and snap with mechanical energy. Through a first-person perspective gliding through dark space, viewers experience sharp, luminous linear filaments that move with rhythmic tension—like springs under stress. The visual effect emerges from thousands of individual root segments drawn as connected lines, each with subtle spring-like deformation and pulsing luminosity that creates an organic yet mechanical atmosphere. The scene's continuous motion builds a sense of automated progression through this ancient, glowing landscape.
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| Repository | https://github.com/profcarroll/sketchgen-gallery/tree/main/e/2173 |
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| Raw sketch | sketch/sketch.js |
| Raw page | sketch/index.html |
| Attempts | 1 |
| Licence | CC BY 4.0 |
| Attribution | “drone POV fly through an abandoned brutalist campus Revise: the same…” — sketchgen entry 2173, prompted by profcarroll, written by qwen3-coder:30b-a3b-q4_K_M under the treatment rules file. https://profcarroll.github.io/sketchgen-gallery/e/2173/ Licensed CC BY 4.0. |
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drone POV fly through an abandoned brutalist campus
Revise: the same first-person perspective glides steadily through a desaturated landscape of massive, monolithic concrete structures, and this time the concrete surfaces show streaks of green moss and grime
Revise: depart: the monolithic geometry and slow decay of the brutalist concrete taken into a subterranean lattice of quartz formations, seen at one city block scale.
Revise: carry: sharp, luminous linearity given to the petrified root systems of an ancient forest, seen at the scale of an abandoned cathedral, driven by the mechanism of a spring under tension.
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drone POV fly through an abandoned brutalist campus
Revise: the same first-person perspective glides steadily through a desaturated landscape of massive, monolithic concrete structures, and this time the concrete surfaces show streaks of green moss and grime
Revise: depart: the monolithic geometry and slow decay of the brutalist concrete taken into a subterranean lattice of quartz formations, seen at one city block scale.
Revise: carry: sharp, luminous linearity given to the petrified root systems of an ancient forest, seen at the scale of an abandoned cathedral, driven by the mechanism of a spring under tension.
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Provenance
| Entry | 2173 |
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| Job | 2188 |
| State | published |
| Prompt | drone POV fly through an abandoned brutalist campus Revise: the same first-person perspective glides steadily through a desaturated landscape of massive, monolithic concrete structures, and this time the concrete surfaces show streaks of green moss and grime Revise: depart: the monolithic geometry and slow decay of the brutalist concrete taken into a subterranean lattice of quartz formations, seen at one city block scale. Revise: carry: sharp, luminous linearity given to the petrified root systems of an ancient forest, seen at the scale of an abandoned cathedral, driven by the mechanism of a spring under tension. |
| Brief | A first-person perspective glides through a cavernous, cathedral-scale void filled with petrified root systems. These roots are rendered as sharp, luminous linear filaments that pulse and snap with the rhythmic, mechanical energy of a spring under tension. The scene moves continuously through the dark space, creating a sense of steady, automated progression through a landscape of glowing, energetic lines. |
| Statement | This sketch renders an immersive, cathedral-scale void filled with petrified root systems that pulse and snap with mechanical energy. Through a first-person perspective gliding through dark space, viewers experience sharp, luminous linear filaments that move with rhythmic tension—like springs under stress. The visual effect emerges from thousands of individual root segments drawn as connected lines, each with subtle spring-like deformation and pulsing luminosity that creates an organic yet mechanical atmosphere. The scene's continuous motion builds a sense of automated progression through this ancient, glowing landscape. |
| Submitted by | profcarroll |
| Planner | gemma4:26b · prompt planner-v2 |
| Executor | qwen3-coder:30b-a3b-q4_K_M · prompt executor-v3 |
| Rules file | treatment |
| Assertions | motion(idle), uses(webgl) |
| Gate | attempt 1: gate exit 0 — motion(idle) pass, uses(webgl) pass |
| Attempts | 1 |
| Prompt tokens | 3369 |
| Completion tokens | 818 |
| Wall seconds | 74.518 |
| Node shape | VM.Standard.A1.Flex 16/96 |
| Seed | 1 |
| Lineage | parent 1980 · children none · generation 3 · critique by gemma4:e4b |
| Revised from | entry 1980's sketch, 89 lines |
| Source | repository · sketch.js · index.html · attempts attempt-1 |
| Created (UTC) | 2026-10-12T21:57:49Z |
| Published (UTC) | 2026-10-15T20:23:25Z |
| Publish commit | fae61213bac1c1726dc3840bfc10e82bf830c26d |
| Licence | CC BY 4.0 |
| Attribution | “drone POV fly through an abandoned brutalist campus Revise: the same…” — sketchgen entry 2173, prompted by profcarroll, written by qwen3-coder:30b-a3b-q4_K_M under the treatment rules file. https://profcarroll.github.io/sketchgen-gallery/e/2173/ Licensed CC BY 4.0. |
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