safari landscape

Revise: the same arid savanna, and this time making the faint dust devils appear larger and more turbulent. gemma4 · generation 14 · 13 earlier revisions in the lineage below

Prompt by profcarroll. Planned by gemma4:e4b, written by qwen3-coder:30b-a3b-q4_K_M.

seed 1 · entry 816 · published

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Brief

The canvas depicts an expansive, arid savanna dominated by deep terracotta earth tones. The ground surface is highly textured, featuring visible cracks and fissures, against which the beige, hazy sky contrasts sharply. Low-angle light casts dramatic, exaggerated shadows into the deep cracks, emphasizing the rough terrain. Small clusters of low scrub shapes are scattered sparsely across the plane. Subtle, swirling dust devils drift across the cracked ground, and a distant, softened rock formation breaks the horizon, creating a constant, slow atmospheric motion.

Artist's statement · qwen3-coder:30b-a3b-q4_K_M, unedited

This sketch depicts an expansive arid savanna landscape dominated by deep terracotta earth tones and high contrast between ground and sky. The composition features cracked terrain with exaggerated shadows, sparse low scrub vegetation, and subtle swirling dust devils drifting across the surface. The technique uses layered gradient skies, procedurally generated cracks and vegetation, and animated particle-like dust devils to create atmospheric motion. The viewer observes a constantly shifting but slowly evolving desert scene that captures the essence of vast, arid landscape through color, texture, and gentle animation.

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Source

Repository	https://github.com/profcarroll/sketchgen-gallery/tree/main/e/816
Raw sketch	sketch/sketch.js
Raw page	sketch/index.html
Attempts	1
Licence	CC BY 4.0
Attribution	“safari landscape Revise: redraw without water safari is typically ass…” — sketchgen entry 816, prompted by profcarroll, written by qwen3-coder:30b-a3b-q4_K_M under the treatment rules file. https://profcarroll.github.io/sketchgen-gallery/e/816/ Licensed CC BY 4.0.

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Lineage · generation 14 of 16 in the line from entry 104

safari landscape
entry 104 · root · profcarroll
11 generations folded · 109, 159, 218, 262, 305, 340, 386, 388, 445, 486, 596 · by profcarroll and gemma4
1. Revise: redraw without water safari is typically associated to arrid enviornments and the acacia tree,
  entry 109 · generation 1 · profcarroll
2. Revise: the same arid expanse, and this time deep terracotta earth tones replacing the dusty browns
  entry 159 · generation 2 · gemma4
3. Revise: the same arid expanse, and this time fewer low scrub shapes
  entry 218 · generation 3 · gemma4
4. Revise: the same arid expanse, and this time slight dust devils drifting across the terracotta ground
  entry 262 · generation 4 · gemma4
5. Revise: the same arid landscape, and this time increasing the contrast between the terracotta ground and the beige sky
  entry 305 · generation 5 · gemma4
6. Revise: the same arid expanse, and this time enhancing the texture of the terracotta ground with visible cracks and fissures
  entry 340 · generation 6 · gemma4
7. Revise: the same arid expanse, and this time having the faint dust devils gather into larger, more organized swirling patterns.
  entry 386 · generation 7 · gemma4
8. Revise: reconsider the depiction of the sky and lack of texture on the earth
  entry 388 · generation 8 · profcarroll
9. Revise: the same arid landscape, and this time establishing a more pronounced, distant rock formation breaking the horizon line.
  entry 445 · generation 9 · gemma4
10. Revise: the same arid landscape, and this time casting the light at a lower angle to exaggerate the shadows within the cracks and fissures.
  entry 486 · generation 10 · gemma4
11. Revise: the same arid savanna, and this time deepening the dramatic shadows within the cracks and fissures.
  entry 596 · generation 11 · gemma4
Revise: the same arid savanna, and this time deepening the dramatic shadows within the cracks and fissures.
entry 682 · generation 12 · gemma4
Revise: the same arid savanna, and this time the distant rock formation is softened and veiled by atmospheric haze.
entry 754 · generation 13 · gemma4
Revise: the same arid savanna, and this time making the faint dust devils appear larger and more turbulent.
entry 816 · generation 14 · gemma4

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Children: entry 866.

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Entry	816
Job	817
State	published
Prompt	safari landscape Revise: redraw without water safari is typically associated to arrid enviornments and the acacia tree, Revise: the same arid expanse, and this time deep terracotta earth tones replacing the dusty browns Revise: the same arid expanse, and this time fewer low scrub shapes Revise: the same arid expanse, and this time slight dust devils drifting across the terracotta ground Revise: the same arid landscape, and this time increasing the contrast between the terracotta ground and the beige sky Revise: the same arid expanse, and this time enhancing the texture of the terracotta ground with visible cracks and fissures Revise: the same arid expanse, and this time having the faint dust devils gather into larger, more organized swirling patterns. Revise: reconsider the depiction of the sky and lack of texture on the earth Revise: the same arid landscape, and this time establishing a more pronounced, distant rock formation breaking the horizon line. Revise: the same arid landscape, and this time casting the light at a lower angle to exaggerate the shadows within the cracks and fissures. Revise: the same arid savanna, and this time deepening the dramatic shadows within the cracks and fissures. Revise: the same arid savanna, and this time deepening the dramatic shadows within the cracks and fissures. Revise: the same arid savanna, and this time the distant rock formation is softened and veiled by atmospheric haze. Revise: the same arid savanna, and this time making the faint dust devils appear larger and more turbulent.
Brief	The canvas depicts an expansive, arid savanna dominated by deep terracotta earth tones. The ground surface is highly textured, featuring visible cracks and fissures, against which the beige, hazy sky contrasts sharply. Low-angle light casts dramatic, exaggerated shadows into the deep cracks, emphasizing the rough terrain. Small clusters of low scrub shapes are scattered sparsely across the plane. Subtle, swirling dust devils drift across the cracked ground, and a distant, softened rock formation breaks the horizon, creating a constant, slow atmospheric motion.
Statement	This sketch depicts an expansive arid savanna landscape dominated by deep terracotta earth tones and high contrast between ground and sky. The composition features cracked terrain with exaggerated shadows, sparse low scrub vegetation, and subtle swirling dust devils drifting across the surface. The technique uses layered gradient skies, procedurally generated cracks and vegetation, and animated particle-like dust devils to create atmospheric motion. The viewer observes a constantly shifting but slowly evolving desert scene that captures the essence of vast, arid landscape through color, texture, and gentle animation.
Submitted by	profcarroll
Planner	gemma4:e4b · prompt planner-v1+lenient
Executor	qwen3-coder:30b-a3b-q4_K_M · prompt executor-v2
Rules file	treatment
Assertions	motion(idle)
Gate	attempt 1: gate exit 0 — motion(idle) pass
Attempts	1
Prompt tokens	2210
Completion tokens	1199
Wall seconds	72.341
Node shape	VM.Standard.A1.Flex 16/94
Seed	1
Lineage	parent 754 · children 866 · generation 14 · critique by gemma4:e4b
Source	repository · sketch.js · index.html · attempts attempt-1
Created (UTC)	2026-09-18T05:50:10Z
Published (UTC)	2026-09-18T05:57:57Z
Publish commit	49218f199028738c3b87522550cd88763262a877
Licence	CC BY 4.0
Attribution	“safari landscape Revise: redraw without water safari is typically ass…” — sketchgen entry 816, prompted by profcarroll, written by qwen3-coder:30b-a3b-q4_K_M under the treatment rules file. https://profcarroll.github.io/sketchgen-gallery/e/816/ Licensed CC BY 4.0.

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