safari landscape

Revise: the same arid savanna, and this time intensifying the contrast between the deep terracotta ground and the shadows cast by the fissures. gemma4 · generation 15 · 14 earlier revisions in the lineage below

Prompt by profcarroll. Planned by gemma4:e4b, written by qwen3-coder:30b-a3b-q4_K_M.

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Brief

The canvas depicts a vast, arid savanna expanse bathed in the dramatic light of a low-angle sun. The foreground and mid-ground are dominated by deep terracotta earth tones, enhanced by visible cracks and fissures that collect deep, dramatic shadows. These strong colors contrast sharply against the pale, hazy beige sky. Distant rock formations break the horizon, and subtle, swirling patterns of dust devils drift across the rugged ground, creating a mood of dramatic stillness and intense contrast.

Artist's statement · qwen3-coder:30b-a3b-q4_K_M, unedited

This sketch renders a still, dramatic savanna landscape under a low-angle sun. The composition uses vertical gradient skies in pale beige tones that transition to deeper terracotta earth in the foreground. Deep cracks in the ground, drawn with stark brown lines, create visual texture and depth, while subtle swirling dust devils drift across the lower portion of the canvas. Distant rock formations are suggested through simple geometric shapes. The scene captures a mood of intense contrast and quiet stillness, emphasizing the harsh beauty of an arid environment.

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Source

Repository	https://github.com/profcarroll/sketchgen-gallery/tree/main/e/866
Raw sketch	sketch/sketch.js
Raw page	sketch/index.html
Attempts	1
Licence	CC BY 4.0
Attribution	“safari landscape Revise: redraw without water safari is typically ass…” — sketchgen entry 866, prompted by profcarroll, written by qwen3-coder:30b-a3b-q4_K_M under the treatment rules file. https://profcarroll.github.io/sketchgen-gallery/e/866/ Licensed CC BY 4.0.

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Lineage · generation 15 of 16 in the line from entry 104

safari landscape
entry 104 · root · profcarroll
12 generations folded · 109, 159, 218, 262, 305, 340, 386, 388, 445, 486, 596, 682 · by profcarroll and gemma4
1. Revise: redraw without water safari is typically associated to arrid enviornments and the acacia tree,
  entry 109 · generation 1 · profcarroll
2. Revise: the same arid expanse, and this time deep terracotta earth tones replacing the dusty browns
  entry 159 · generation 2 · gemma4
3. Revise: the same arid expanse, and this time fewer low scrub shapes
  entry 218 · generation 3 · gemma4
4. Revise: the same arid expanse, and this time slight dust devils drifting across the terracotta ground
  entry 262 · generation 4 · gemma4
5. Revise: the same arid landscape, and this time increasing the contrast between the terracotta ground and the beige sky
  entry 305 · generation 5 · gemma4
6. Revise: the same arid expanse, and this time enhancing the texture of the terracotta ground with visible cracks and fissures
  entry 340 · generation 6 · gemma4
7. Revise: the same arid expanse, and this time having the faint dust devils gather into larger, more organized swirling patterns.
  entry 386 · generation 7 · gemma4
8. Revise: reconsider the depiction of the sky and lack of texture on the earth
  entry 388 · generation 8 · profcarroll
9. Revise: the same arid landscape, and this time establishing a more pronounced, distant rock formation breaking the horizon line.
  entry 445 · generation 9 · gemma4
10. Revise: the same arid landscape, and this time casting the light at a lower angle to exaggerate the shadows within the cracks and fissures.
  entry 486 · generation 10 · gemma4
11. Revise: the same arid savanna, and this time deepening the dramatic shadows within the cracks and fissures.
  entry 596 · generation 11 · gemma4
12. Revise: the same arid savanna, and this time deepening the dramatic shadows within the cracks and fissures.
  entry 682 · generation 12 · gemma4
Revise: the same arid savanna, and this time the distant rock formation is softened and veiled by atmospheric haze.
entry 754 · generation 13 · gemma4
Revise: the same arid savanna, and this time making the faint dust devils appear larger and more turbulent.
entry 816 · generation 14 · gemma4
Revise: the same arid savanna, and this time intensifying the contrast between the deep terracotta ground and the shadows cast by the fissures.
entry 866 · generation 15 · gemma4

After this entry: 1 child

Children: entry 926.

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the child's prompt

safari landscape

Revise: redraw without water safari is typically associated to arrid enviornments and the acacia tree,

Revise: the same arid expanse, and this time deep terracotta earth tones replacing the dusty browns

Revise: the same arid expanse, and this time fewer low scrub shapes

Revise: the same arid expanse, and this time slight dust devils drifting across the terracotta ground

Revise: the same arid landscape, and this time increasing the contrast between the terracotta ground and the beige sky

Revise: the same arid expanse, and this time enhancing the texture of the terracotta ground with visible cracks and fissures

Revise: the same arid expanse, and this time having the faint dust devils gather into larger, more organized swirling patterns.

Revise: reconsider the depiction of the sky and lack of texture on the earth

Revise: the same arid landscape, and this time establishing a more pronounced, distant rock formation breaking the horizon line.

Revise: the same arid landscape, and this time casting the light at a lower angle to exaggerate the shadows within the cracks and fissures.

Revise: the same arid savanna, and this time deepening the dramatic shadows within the cracks and fissures.

Revise: the same arid savanna, and this time the distant rock formation is softened and veiled by atmospheric haze.

Revise: the same arid savanna, and this time making the faint dust devils appear larger and more turbulent.

Revise: the same arid savanna, and this time intensifying the contrast between the deep terracotta ground and the shadows cast by the fissures.

Revise: …

Provenance

Entry	866
Job	867
State	published
Prompt	safari landscape Revise: redraw without water safari is typically associated to arrid enviornments and the acacia tree, Revise: the same arid expanse, and this time deep terracotta earth tones replacing the dusty browns Revise: the same arid expanse, and this time fewer low scrub shapes Revise: the same arid expanse, and this time slight dust devils drifting across the terracotta ground Revise: the same arid landscape, and this time increasing the contrast between the terracotta ground and the beige sky Revise: the same arid expanse, and this time enhancing the texture of the terracotta ground with visible cracks and fissures Revise: the same arid expanse, and this time having the faint dust devils gather into larger, more organized swirling patterns. Revise: reconsider the depiction of the sky and lack of texture on the earth Revise: the same arid landscape, and this time establishing a more pronounced, distant rock formation breaking the horizon line. Revise: the same arid landscape, and this time casting the light at a lower angle to exaggerate the shadows within the cracks and fissures. Revise: the same arid savanna, and this time deepening the dramatic shadows within the cracks and fissures. Revise: the same arid savanna, and this time deepening the dramatic shadows within the cracks and fissures. Revise: the same arid savanna, and this time the distant rock formation is softened and veiled by atmospheric haze. Revise: the same arid savanna, and this time making the faint dust devils appear larger and more turbulent. Revise: the same arid savanna, and this time intensifying the contrast between the deep terracotta ground and the shadows cast by the fissures.
Brief	The canvas depicts a vast, arid savanna expanse bathed in the dramatic light of a low-angle sun. The foreground and mid-ground are dominated by deep terracotta earth tones, enhanced by visible cracks and fissures that collect deep, dramatic shadows. These strong colors contrast sharply against the pale, hazy beige sky. Distant rock formations break the horizon, and subtle, swirling patterns of dust devils drift across the rugged ground, creating a mood of dramatic stillness and intense contrast.
Statement	This sketch renders a still, dramatic savanna landscape under a low-angle sun. The composition uses vertical gradient skies in pale beige tones that transition to deeper terracotta earth in the foreground. Deep cracks in the ground, drawn with stark brown lines, create visual texture and depth, while subtle swirling dust devils drift across the lower portion of the canvas. Distant rock formations are suggested through simple geometric shapes. The scene captures a mood of intense contrast and quiet stillness, emphasizing the harsh beauty of an arid environment.
Submitted by	profcarroll
Planner	gemma4:e4b · prompt planner-v1
Executor	qwen3-coder:30b-a3b-q4_K_M · prompt executor-v2
Rules file	treatment
Assertions	no_motion
Gate	attempt 1: gate exit 0 — no_motion pass
Attempts	1
Prompt tokens	2199
Completion tokens	852
Wall seconds	57.532
Node shape	VM.Standard.A1.Flex 16/94
Seed	1
Lineage	parent 816 · children 926 · generation 15 · critique by gemma4:e4b
Source	repository · sketch.js · index.html · attempts attempt-1
Created (UTC)	2026-09-18T10:46:19Z
Published (UTC)	2026-09-18T14:49:45Z
Publish commit	6b4ace8de09e8d5e9e333c3e341776ed5d550a20
Licence	CC BY 4.0
Attribution	“safari landscape Revise: redraw without water safari is typically ass…” — sketchgen entry 866, prompted by profcarroll, written by qwen3-coder:30b-a3b-q4_K_M under the treatment rules file. https://profcarroll.github.io/sketchgen-gallery/e/866/ Licensed CC BY 4.0.

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