safari landscape

Revise: the same arid savanna expanse, and this time deepening the dramatic shadows within the visible cracks and fissures. gemma4 · generation 16 · 15 earlier revisions in the lineage below

Prompt by profcarroll. Planned by gemma4:e4b, written by qwen3-coder:30b-a3b-q4_K_M.

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Brief

The scene depicts a vast, dramatic arid savanna expanse bathed in the rich hues of deep terracotta. The ground is intensely textured with visible cracks and fissures, exaggerating the contrast with the beige sky. Shadows cast by the low, dramatic light deepen the drama within the earth's cracks, while distant rock formations pierce the horizon line, sometimes softened by atmospheric haze. Subtle, turbulent dust devils drift and swirl across the richly colored ground, giving the landscape a palpable sense of ongoing, quiet movement.

Artist's statement · qwen3-coder:30b-a3b-q4_K_M, unedited

This sketch renders a dramatic arid savanna landscape dominated by deep terracotta tones and rich textural contrasts. The scene features a cracked, fissured ground that emphasizes the harshness of the environment, with subtle dust devils drifting across the surface to create a sense of quiet motion and ongoing geological activity. The composition uses gradient sky coloring and carefully placed cracks to create depth and visual interest, while the swirling dust particles add dynamic movement without overwhelming the static landscape. The entire scene evolves organically through particle motion and color transitions, creating an immersive yet controlled depiction of a vast, atmospheric savanna under dramatic lighting conditions.

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Source

Repository	https://github.com/profcarroll/sketchgen-gallery/tree/main/e/926
Raw sketch	sketch/sketch.js
Raw page	sketch/index.html
Attempts	1
Licence	CC BY 4.0
Attribution	“safari landscape Revise: redraw without water safari is typically ass…” — sketchgen entry 926, prompted by profcarroll, written by qwen3-coder:30b-a3b-q4_K_M under the treatment rules file. https://profcarroll.github.io/sketchgen-gallery/e/926/ Licensed CC BY 4.0.

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Lineage · generation 16 of 16 in the line from entry 104

safari landscape
entry 104 · root · profcarroll
13 generations folded · 109, 159, 218, 262, 305, 340, 386, 388, 445, 486, 596, 682, 754 · by profcarroll and gemma4
1. Revise: redraw without water safari is typically associated to arrid enviornments and the acacia tree,
  entry 109 · generation 1 · profcarroll
2. Revise: the same arid expanse, and this time deep terracotta earth tones replacing the dusty browns
  entry 159 · generation 2 · gemma4
3. Revise: the same arid expanse, and this time fewer low scrub shapes
  entry 218 · generation 3 · gemma4
4. Revise: the same arid expanse, and this time slight dust devils drifting across the terracotta ground
  entry 262 · generation 4 · gemma4
5. Revise: the same arid landscape, and this time increasing the contrast between the terracotta ground and the beige sky
  entry 305 · generation 5 · gemma4
6. Revise: the same arid expanse, and this time enhancing the texture of the terracotta ground with visible cracks and fissures
  entry 340 · generation 6 · gemma4
7. Revise: the same arid expanse, and this time having the faint dust devils gather into larger, more organized swirling patterns.
  entry 386 · generation 7 · gemma4
8. Revise: reconsider the depiction of the sky and lack of texture on the earth
  entry 388 · generation 8 · profcarroll
9. Revise: the same arid landscape, and this time establishing a more pronounced, distant rock formation breaking the horizon line.
  entry 445 · generation 9 · gemma4
10. Revise: the same arid landscape, and this time casting the light at a lower angle to exaggerate the shadows within the cracks and fissures.
  entry 486 · generation 10 · gemma4
11. Revise: the same arid savanna, and this time deepening the dramatic shadows within the cracks and fissures.
  entry 596 · generation 11 · gemma4
12. Revise: the same arid savanna, and this time deepening the dramatic shadows within the cracks and fissures.
  entry 682 · generation 12 · gemma4
13. Revise: the same arid savanna, and this time the distant rock formation is softened and veiled by atmospheric haze.
  entry 754 · generation 13 · gemma4
Revise: the same arid savanna, and this time making the faint dust devils appear larger and more turbulent.
entry 816 · generation 14 · gemma4
Revise: the same arid savanna, and this time intensifying the contrast between the deep terracotta ground and the shadows cast by the fissures.
entry 866 · generation 15 · gemma4
Revise: the same arid savanna expanse, and this time deepening the dramatic shadows within the visible cracks and fissures.
entry 926 · generation 16 · gemma4

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Provenance

Entry	926
Job	928
State	rejected
Prompt	safari landscape Revise: redraw without water safari is typically associated to arrid enviornments and the acacia tree, Revise: the same arid expanse, and this time deep terracotta earth tones replacing the dusty browns Revise: the same arid expanse, and this time fewer low scrub shapes Revise: the same arid expanse, and this time slight dust devils drifting across the terracotta ground Revise: the same arid landscape, and this time increasing the contrast between the terracotta ground and the beige sky Revise: the same arid expanse, and this time enhancing the texture of the terracotta ground with visible cracks and fissures Revise: the same arid expanse, and this time having the faint dust devils gather into larger, more organized swirling patterns. Revise: reconsider the depiction of the sky and lack of texture on the earth Revise: the same arid landscape, and this time establishing a more pronounced, distant rock formation breaking the horizon line. Revise: the same arid landscape, and this time casting the light at a lower angle to exaggerate the shadows within the cracks and fissures. Revise: the same arid savanna, and this time deepening the dramatic shadows within the cracks and fissures. Revise: the same arid savanna, and this time deepening the dramatic shadows within the cracks and fissures. Revise: the same arid savanna, and this time the distant rock formation is softened and veiled by atmospheric haze. Revise: the same arid savanna, and this time making the faint dust devils appear larger and more turbulent. Revise: the same arid savanna, and this time intensifying the contrast between the deep terracotta ground and the shadows cast by the fissures. Revise: the same arid savanna expanse, and this time deepening the dramatic shadows within the visible cracks and fissures.
Brief	The scene depicts a vast, dramatic arid savanna expanse bathed in the rich hues of deep terracotta. The ground is intensely textured with visible cracks and fissures, exaggerating the contrast with the beige sky. Shadows cast by the low, dramatic light deepen the drama within the earth's cracks, while distant rock formations pierce the horizon line, sometimes softened by atmospheric haze. Subtle, turbulent dust devils drift and swirl across the richly colored ground, giving the landscape a palpable sense of ongoing, quiet movement.
Statement	This sketch renders a dramatic arid savanna landscape dominated by deep terracotta tones and rich textural contrasts. The scene features a cracked, fissured ground that emphasizes the harshness of the environment, with subtle dust devils drifting across the surface to create a sense of quiet motion and ongoing geological activity. The composition uses gradient sky coloring and carefully placed cracks to create depth and visual interest, while the swirling dust particles add dynamic movement without overwhelming the static landscape. The entire scene evolves organically through particle motion and color transitions, creating an immersive yet controlled depiction of a vast, atmospheric savanna under dramatic lighting conditions.
Submitted by	profcarroll
Planner	gemma4:e4b · prompt planner-v1
Executor	qwen3-coder:30b-a3b-q4_K_M · prompt executor-v3
Rules file	treatment
Assertions	motion(idle)
Gate	attempt 1: gate exit 0 — motion(idle) pass
Attempts	1
Prompt tokens	2389
Completion tokens	803
Wall seconds	58.025
Node shape	VM.Standard.A1.Flex 16/94
Seed	1
Lineage	parent 866 · children none · generation 16 · critique by gemma4:e4b
Source	repository · sketch.js · index.html · attempts attempt-1
Created (UTC)	2026-09-18T21:22:28Z
Published (UTC)	2026-09-19T03:55:17Z
Publish commit	8910aa6d33aee394831cd84e7eae94f372c2800b
Licence	CC BY 4.0
Attribution	“safari landscape Revise: redraw without water safari is typically ass…” — sketchgen entry 926, prompted by profcarroll, written by qwen3-coder:30b-a3b-q4_K_M under the treatment rules file. https://profcarroll.github.io/sketchgen-gallery/e/926/ Licensed CC BY 4.0.
Last error	rejected by operator

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